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五年制作文批改规则
常见写作错误
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英语作文的框架
对比观点题型
（1） 要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法
1．有一些人认为……
2．另一些人认为……
3．我的看法……The topic of
①-----------------（主题）is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of
②-----------------（支持A的理由一）What is more, ③-------------理由二). Moreover, ④--------------(理由三). While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一). Secondly (besides),⑥------------------（理由二）. Thirdly (finally),⑦------------------(理由三). From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------（我的观点）. The reason is that ⑨--------------------(原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice .
（2） 给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点
Some people believe that ①----------------（观点一）. For example, they think ②----------------（举例说明）．And it will bring them ③---------------(为他们带来的好处).In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point. For one thing,④-------------(我不同意该看法的理由一). For another thing, ⑤---------(反对的理由之二)．From all what I have said, I agree to the thought that ⑥-----(我对文章所讨论主题的看法)．
阐述主题题型
要求从一句话或一个主题出发，按照提纲的要求进行论述．
１.主题所蕴涵的意义.
２.分析并举例使其更充实． The good old proverb ----------------（名言或谚语）reminds us that ----------------(释义). Indeed, we can learn many things form it. First of all,-----------------(理由一). For example, -------------------(举例说明). Secondly,--------------(理由二). Another case is that ---------------(举例说明). Furthermore , ------------------(理由三)． In my opinion, ----------------(我的观点). In short, whatever you do, please remember A. If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you’ll necessarily benefit a lot from it.
解决方法题型
要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径
１. 问题现状
２. 怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点) In recent days, we have to face I problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, ------------(说明Ａ的现状).Second, ----------(举例进一步说明现状) Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, ---------------(解决方法一). For another -------------(解决方法二). Finally, --------------(解决方法三). Personally, I believe that -------------(我的解决方法). Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because --------------(带来的好处).
说明利弊题型
这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状，再对比事物本身的利弊，有时也会单从一个角度（利或弊）出发，最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度（或对事物前景提出预测）
1.说明事物现状
2.事物本身的优缺点（或一方面）
3.你对现状（或前景）的看法 Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First ----------------(Ａ的优点之一). Besides -------------------（Ａ的优点之二）. But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that ----------------(Ａ的第一个缺点)．To make matters worse,------------------(Ａ的第二个缺点)．Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones. Therefore, I would like to ----(我的看法)．From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in. Only in this way, ---------------(对前景的预测)．
议论文的框架
(1) 不同观点列举型（ 选择型 ） There is a widespread concern over the issue that 作文题目. But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person. A majority of people think that 观点一____. In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, 原因一____.Furthermore, in the second place, 原因二__. So it goes without saying that 观点一_. People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter. Some people hold the idea that_观二___. In their point of view, on the one hand， _原因一_. On the other hand, __原因二_. Therefore, there is no doubt that 观点二__. As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __观点一或二. It is not only because __, but also because __. The more , the more ____.
利弊型的议论文
Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)_作文题目__. In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __题目议题___. Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows. Firstly, _优点一__. And secondly _优点二_. Just As a popular saying goes, "every coin has two sides",讨论议题is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects. To begin with,缺 点 一 .In addition, 缺 点 二 . To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of 讨论议题into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time. In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the __讨论议题_.
答题性议论文
Currently, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that) 作文题目 .It is really an important concern to every one of us. As a result, we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this problem.As we know that there are many steps which can be taken to undo this problem. First of all, 途径一. In addition, another way contributing to success of the solving problem is _途径二. Above all, to solve the problem of 作文题目, we should find a number of various ways. But as far as I am concerned, I would prefer to solve the problem in this way, that is to say, 方法
谚语警句性议论文
It is well know to us that the proverb“ 谚语 ”has a profound significance and value not only in our job but also in our study. It means _谚语的含义_. The saying can be illustrated through a series of examples as follows. ( also theoretically ) A case in point is 例子一 . Therefore, it is goes without saying that it is of great of importance to practice the proverb 谚语 . With the rapid development of science and technology in China, an increasing number of people come to realize that it is also of practical use to stick to the saying: _谚语__. The more we are aware of the significance of this famous saying, the more benefits we will get in our daily study and job.
巧妙衔接,流畅行文过渡
过渡1:起始与顺序
★起始关系:to begin with,first of all,as you know,as is known,as is shown in...,according to...等。
【秒杀】众所周知,语言是最重要的交流工具。As is known to us all,language is the most important means of communication.
★时间顺序:at the beginning,then,later,finally,at last,in the end,afterwards,since then,after that,immediately,meanwhile等。
【秒杀】首先我擦去所有家具上的灰尘,接着我把所有的散落在屋子里的东西收拾起来放好,然后拖了地。At the beginning,I wiped the dust off all the furniture.Then I collected all the things scattered in the rooms and put them in place.After that,I mopped the floor.
过渡2:并列与转折
★并列关系:and,or,as well as,not only...but also...,either...or...,neither...nor...等。
【秒杀】我知道你很会拍照,并且一直想为环境保护做贡献。I know you take good pictures and you’ve always wanted to do something for environmental protection.
★转折关系:but,yet,however,while,otherwise,on the contrary,nevertheless等。
【秒杀】然而,我不太确定我所使用的语言和格式。However,I am not quite sure of the language and the format I’ve used.
过渡3:条件与因果
★条件关系:
if,unless,in case (of),as/so long as,on condition that,provided (that)等。
【秒杀】如果你想参加,就发送你的照片到intlphotoshow@gmschool.com。If you want to join,you can send your photos to intlphotoshow@gmschool.com.
因果关系:because,as,since,for,thanks to,due to,as a result of,so,therefore,as a result/consequence等。
【秒杀】因此,我们不必为结果而担心。Therefore,there is no reason for us to be anxious about the result.
过渡4:列举与递进
★列举事实:
such as,for example/instance,take...for example,that is to say,as follows,in other words,on the one hand...on the other (hand)...,for one thing...for another...等。
【秒杀】一方面,我能通过做这样的事赚些钱来帮助父母;另一方面,我能从中获得一些经验。On the one hand,I can earn some money by doing it to help my parents.On the other hand,I can gain some experience from it.
★递进关系:
besides,what’s more,moreover,furthermore,what’s worse,still less,to make matters worse,worse still,more importantly等。
【秒杀1】他们中的很多人几乎不能照顾自己,更别说经营他们自己的人生了。Many of them can hardly look after themselves,still less manage their own life.
【秒杀2】此外,在互联网上投票使即时反馈成为可能。Furthermore,voting on the Internet makes instant feedback possible.
过渡5:观点与总结
★表示观点:in my opinion,in my view,in my point of view,as far as I am concerned,as for me,personally等。
【秒杀1】以我看来,他们代表爱、友谊和团结。In my point of view,they stand for love,friendship and unity.【秒杀2】在我看来,网络投票已经开始显示其对人和社会的负面影响。In my opinion,Internet voting has begun to show its negative impacts on people and society.
★总结:in short,in brief,in conclusion,in a word,to sum up,all in all,on the whole,in general,generally speaking等。
【秒杀1】总的来说,旅游是丰富我们的生活、准备迎接新的挑战的最好的选择。On the whole,traveling is the best choice to enrich our lives and get ready for the new challenges.
【秒杀2】简而言之,网络投票在某种程度上是不公平的。In short,Internet voting,to some extent,is unfair.
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